Thursday, January 24, 2008


The two boys cycle up and down the street, the smaller of the two sitting pillion. He clings to the larger boys back like a small monkey, his eyelids scrunched together to keep out the intrusive afternoon sun that knocks with a hot, insistent hand. After a few lazy laps the smaller one begins to whine and complain. It’s his chance he insists, his turn to navigate their ship. The larger boy ignores him, choosing instead to introduce a swaying motion to his pedaling so that the cycle careens, left right left right. The smaller boy is silenced temporarily; distracted by this new trick but soon starts up again. His pleas get louder, a tinge of annoyance and anger slipping in to the occasional ‘Anna’, picking at the striped back before him and flailing his legs out in petulance. The larger boy finally relents and gets off. He watches silently as his friend struggles on to the cycle with shorter chubbier legs. After a few slips and slides, the small boy sits triumphantly on his throne and beckons the other to sit astride with a jerk of his head. The older boy looks at him a moment before throwing back a careless ‘tsk’ and walking away.

1 comment:

Mazhaiyodu Nannum said...

when happiness is "dawn".. and sadness is "dusk".. an acute sense of betrayal, disappointment and the very slight complex of having to ask - can be and is "afternoon".. especially when it can readily and very quickly move on to a sprightly "evening" in no time.. the heaviness of the "afternoon" easily forgotten..brought back a lot of childhood memories..lovely narrative!