I rarely think of school days. Today my art partner's samosa reminded me of a friend that used to steal them from the canteen! And that seemed to open a little trap door in my head to a time when I wore two plaits and a very unbecoming blue pinafore.
i
The quadrangle is flooded.
Blue pinafores hitched up at the knees
And unpolished, dusty, Bata shoes
Suddenly glisten
polished by dirty puddles of rain water
Braids are straightened – one fat and one thin
Meenakshi never gets them right
The uniform monitor scrutinises us
And we say a silent thanks to the rain
For shining our shoes
If only it had washed away the nail polish
We think, kneeling outside our classroom
ii
Fountain Pepsi arrives at school
We queue and jostle
School bags are upturned for loose change
Bus and lunch money is spent
One Pepsi is purchased
And passed around
We feel like college boys sharing a cigarette
And giggle
iii
Our
class
is
standing
single
file
in
the
prayer
hall
I
Open
One
Eye
And
See
The
Oiled
hair
of
the
Girl
Before
me.
two
head
lice
crawl
out
single
file
and
look
at
me.
i
think
Wednesday, March 29, 2006
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Oh my God.. thank you!!
I was reminded of the mad scramble to clean away the nailpolish on a Monday morning.. much before the removers made their way to becoming an everyday presence on my dressing table.
Thank you for this post :)
thank god i dint study in a girls skool....lolz...
someone somehere - you're welcome :)
1$st - well unless you shaved your chest and grew breasts i don't see how you'd be let inside one :P
hehe at a 'pain' staring at you.. cute.
gosh, that brings back a flood of memories!
I like the one word per line technique.
and when was the last time you braided your hair? :)
Hehe, cute !
That last stanza was brilliant!
alpha - but gross :)
inkblot - thanks! i braided my hair last night actually! but one braid not two :D
ash, raj - thanks!
doesn't ahead have a "movement" in it?
doesn't "in front of me" sound as if "she is looking at me and I am looking at her"?
I think "before" sounds right
but, what do I know about "English"? :-)
One satisfying part of being a writer is how others feel when they read your stuff. The other, slightly more satisfying emotion is when you provide inspiration to other writers. One word of this post stuck in my head for so long, and came out in a post I wrote.
http://theangelsareoutthere.blogspot.com/2006/03/sometimes.html
I hope you dont mind.. :) Please read and let me know what you think!
ok I cant get the link to show up completely :) Please click on
http://theangelsareoutthere.blogspot.com
and read post titled "Sometimes"
thanks :)
tcc - hmm good question! i think premalatha has an answer! :)
premalatha - wow! that's a pretty indepth answer! thanks :)
mumbaigirl - ugh! one of the worst things about school
someone, somewhere - that's such a nice thing to say! thanks. I read your piece. It's lovely.
wow, totally relate to the fountain pepsi piece! Minus the giggles, of course...
You a Rosary Matric girl, Shoof? :)
d&c - :)
shyam - no! keep guessing...
Thank you!
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