i
Her everyday life was dictated by the whims and fancies of animate and inanimate beings. Woken by the alarm’s strident shrillness. Meals based on the price of onions and tomatoes. Television dictated by the sticky hands that held the remote. Sleep when she heard the grunt of her husband as he went limp above her.
ii
She couldn’t help but stare. He was big. And black. Clad in a pair of jeans that clung to him intimately. Apart from a smattering of dark curly hair near his wrists his arms were smooth. She wondered if the rest of him was as bare. And blushed.
‘Probably remembering last night’ her husband grinned.
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9 comments:
Enjoyed both the stories, but liked the second one a lot. Only we know what we are thinking while everybody else is just playing the guessing game.
Surely you mean kathai-heh heh heh. They're very nice.
wow...i loved the second one..
Loved the first one, Shoof, especially the first line. Kickass start!
Thanks guys :D
Excellent. Inspires me to keep trying more 55s. But a translation of the title is needed :)
The first is excellent! Specially the Meals based on the price of onions and tomatoes.
Great :)
Are we voting?
They're both excellent, but I'll go with the first one because I've never seen a guy with hair only on his wrists and nowhere else on his upper body.
Is that even possible?
Love it! I sort of think of the second one as an extension of the first!
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